| ROMEO I fear, too early: for my mind misgives Some consequence yet hanging in the stars Shall bitterly begin his fearful date With this night’s revels and expire the term Of a despised life closed in my breast By some vile forfeit of untimely death. |
Just before Romeo heads over to the Capulet ball, where he falls in love with and meets (in that order) Juliet, he tells us that he has a funny felling – he fears that something “hanging in the stars” (something destined to happen) will be set in motion that night. Romeo’s premonition seems to be in keeping with what the Chorus tells us in the Prologue
January 25, 2015 at 5:47 pm
Esteban, this is another original response to the task set. Very well done.
Targets:
1) You draw out some of Kerr’s original arguments, but I think you could do with one more to ensure you fully meet the needs of the task.
2) Could you check your paragraphing? I think it is an edutronic fault, but can you make it clear where the writing starts a new paragraph?
3) Your response contains too much irrelevant information. Ensure you remain tightly focussed on disagreeing with Kerr.
Current grade:
Writing: 33/40 (B2)
Reading: 7/10 (C2)