The chance meeting between Servant Peter and Romeo with Benvolio, showing them the party list.
Also the quotation by romeo, “But He that hath the steevage of my course, direct my sail.” – Metaphor meaning that he is a ship captained by god.
The chance meeting between Servant Peter and Romeo with Benvolio, showing them the party list.
Also the quotation by romeo, “But He that hath the steevage of my course, direct my sail.” – Metaphor meaning that he is a ship captained by god.
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December 8, 2014 at 12:50 pm
Word Count: 665
Comments: Very sophisticated exploitation of genre and language.
Phrases like “The last thing i remember is looking up and hearing my skull crack as the wooden stock smashed into the side of my temple.” show great aptitude with language. Multiple clauses are deployed to good effect in a complex way.
One weakness which could be improved is the reliance on similar sentence openings, such as “I”. Repetition should be avoided wherever possible. In general though this is generic without being cliched.
Moderated Mark: 30/40